English NCEA 3.7 – Significant Connections

I wake up at 7:45am to my alarm beeping in ear. 1 Hour later my teacher pushes a button on her computer to tell the school I am present. 15 minutes later another teacher recordes my presence. By 9:15 three people in the school know I am present and by 9:30 four of my schoolmates have seen a snapchat of me in my classes. This right here shows that people take notice of my presence everyday and can see my whereabouts and doings every minute of every day. Between 8:45 and 9:30am from Monday to Friday I have no privacy. Winston Smith, Offred and John Anderton from the texts ‘Nineteen Eighty-Four’, ‘The Handmaid’s Tale’ and ‘Minority Report’ shows us the struggle of surveillance and the effects it has on them and their society as well as a few RadioHead lyrics which shows us what has happened after not listening to the warnings in these texts.

The dystopian novel ‘Nineteen Eighty-Four’ follows the life of the protagonist Winston Smith who lives in a shaken up version of London, that was previously struck by a nuclear war, in which they call Oceania. Oceania is under constant surveillance of the totalitarian state The Party for which the show figure of the party is a character called Big Brother. We see in the novel how this harsh surveillance affects Oceania when we read “Winston kept his back turned to the telescreen. It was safer; though, as he well knew, even a back can be revealing.” This scene takes place inside Winston’s house which is important to us as knowing this we see just how little privacy the people of Oceania have. Having a device in the houses of these people that can not only see everything a person does but that can also hear everything a person says means that no one has any privacy. We also see from this that Winston cannot show his front to the telescreen in fear of showing some form of individuality and thoughts of his own that he also fears that even his back can show. This means he is to keep all thoughts and feelings to himself every second of everyday never showing expression of these feelings and forever believing and doing everything Big Brother (The Party)  says and does. The importance of this is high as we can see how the intense surveillance in this society affects the citizens in every which way, they have no sense of self and no sense of individuality in which to express themselves, they have been brainwashed through surveillance. 

“Nothing was your own except the few cubic centimetres inside your skull.” The idea of this quote stays not only in George Orwell’s fiction but also in real life society today. With technology advancing so fast around us we have less access to privacy everyday. We have microphones listening to our every word, cameras watching our every move and the worst part about this all, we chose this life. When we choose to purchase smartphones or laptops we effectively agree to have phone and laptop companies listen and watch us constantly. We put all our details online and pour our life out in posting photos and videos with personal captions that the whole world can access. Orwell not only predicted this would happen but believed it would get so bad to the point where media takes away ALL of our privacy entirely and we are left with only a “few cubic centimetres inside our skull” which now in 2019 bodes true. The outcome of Orwell’s prediction was that soon the government, whoever it may be, will be able to control us through the media and use it to surveil every move and every word and then use that against us to brainwash us.  Even now, writing this piece of writing I am posting it onto a blog that can been seen by the entire world and will later be read and marked by my teacher. He will go through the whole piece looking at exactly what I have written and when I wrote it to see if it has been written within the time deadline as he can see that through the use of technology and my computer surveilling me. A scary thought? Yes.

Like in George Orwell’s ‘Nineteen Eighty-Four’ we see a similar theme of surveillance in Margaret Atwood’s ‘The Handmaid’s Tale’.  ‘The Handmaid’s Tale’ is a dystopian novel that follows the life, present and past, of the protagonist Offred. Offred lives in the Republic of Gilead where she lives under her commander Fred and is under constant surveillance in the house of Commander Fred, Commander Fred’s wife (Serena Joy), the Marthas and the Angles. But it doesn’t stop there, whenever Offred is to leave the house she is still under surveillance from The Eyes who walk the streets listening and watching, just waiting for someone to do or say something illegal. “A rat in a maze is free to go anywhere, as long as it stays inside the maze.” In this situation Offred and the other handmaids are much like the rat where yes they are allowed out of the house to go walking, to pick up the groceries and to go to outside events occasionally, however they are still stuck in Gilead where they have to abide by every rule, talk in the terms they have been told to use and show no emotion or feeling they haven’t been told to feel, they are still trapped. 

“Sanity is a valuable possession; I hoard it the way people once hoarded money. I save it, so I will have enough when the time comes.” Offred shows us in this sentence just how hard it is having people constantly telling you what to say, what to think and what to do. When people start controlling you you lose all sense of self and sanity, she talks about saving her sanity for “when the time comes.” We know this is because she is hopeful she might get out of Gilead one day and when that day comes she needs to have some of her sanity left so she can leave because the alternative is staying in Gilead and being completely brainwashed. All of this leads back to surveillance and how having people watching and listening to your every move can affect you. Gloriavale is a small community on the west coast of New Zealand that mirrors Gilead perfectly. They are a small amish community in which they have members who wander around making sure people are doing as they have been told to do, speaking to each other as they have been told to and are abiding by a strict set of rules the community has been set. On top of this it has been known that Gloriavale sets family members apart from their families as to keep the rest of the family there as well as having annual reproduction times. Margaret Atwood warned us that something similar to Gilead may come around however I’m unsure how precise she thought her warning would be and I wonder if she even thought a place as intense as Gloriavale could occur.

The 2002 film ‘Minority Report’ directed by Steven Speilberg connects back to Margaret Atwood’s ‘The Handmaid’s Tale’ through the theme of surveillance as well. ‘Minority Report’ is a dystopian film that follows the protagonist John Anderton as he works to stop crime before it happens, something that is called precrime. The people that live in this society live under constant surveillance. They live with the Precogs who see all and hear all. They see all who are about to commit crimes and make it a job for people like John Anderton to stop them before they commit the crime. This may seem all well and good as it now means there is no crime in the world, however it also means there is no privacy in this community as they are now all under constant surveillance from the government through the Precogs. There is a scene in the film where the Director Lamar Burgess says to John Anderton “You can’t run John” to which he replies “everybody runs.” We see here that John has worked so long in the precrime business that when he is finally involved in the crimes he knows just how the surveillance system works and how although he’ll never get away with his crime he will still try and run like everyone before him. He knows the system so well and knows how no one can escape as they are trapped within the surveillance of this society. 

“In the land of the blind, the one eyed man is king.” Here we see just how surveillance has upset this community. Gideon who says this, is lucky to have one eye as it means he can only see certain things which keeps him safe from the government. As the government is constantly surveilling people he knows that it is safer to not see anything than to see it all. He enlightens John with this statement in a dark alley as to show John that he is safer than him. When John is later on involved in crime he needs to take out his eyeballs and replace them with another person’s eyes, although this may not be a direct point to Gideon it seems only fair that the symbol of eyes in the film ‘Minority Report’ relates back to the theme of surveillance as in the film they are the people in the society’s one true identity and that is also how they are seen, through the Precogs eyes. We see this back in today’s society too through technology like security cameras. Cameras can be placed to catch people committing crimes as well as just to see what people are doing and why. This is a big invasion of privacy that ‘Minority Report’ not only predicted but also showed the entirety of the outcome which would be stopping crime BEFORE it happens. This may not be far from the future and could happen soon enough which is not only scary to see but also frightening to believe that it had previously been predicted.

The final text relating to this theme of surveillance and its effects on society would be a collection of RadioHead lyrics. One of RadioHead’s songs is called ‘2+2=5’, there is a lyric in this song which portrays the naivety of society and how we have ignored every warning from every text we have ever been shown and have decided to continue what we have been doing without taking these warnings into account. “You have not been paying attention and 2+2 does now equal 5” is a line in the RadioHead song ‘2+2=5’. In this line we see how although we have been warned time and time again we have not learnt to listen to these warnings and we have continued to be naive in our advance of technology and now we are subject to what the government around us believe and can easily be brainwashed into thinking what others think. 

Another lyric that shows our ignorance is from the song ‘Fake Plastic Trees’ by RadioHead again.  “She bought from a rubber man in a town full of rubber plans.” We see from this that because we never listened to the warnings in previous texts we now have to create a facade to pretend we are plastic with no feelings as to not show our real selves to people around us and the government. RadioHead is telling us that it no longer is a warning and it is now real life. We are past being warned and now we have to pretend. We have to put up a fake persona in a fake town with fake feelings because we are now past the point of no return. We have done this to ourselves and chosen this life on our own by buying smartphones, putting our lives onto the internet and letting everyone in the world see who we are through all of our personal information being posted online. We have now succumb to what we have been warned about and there is no going back.

In 2013 I bought my first cellphone. In 2015 I bought my first smartphone. In 2017 I bought my first laptop. It was only one month ago when I found out I now have no privacy against the world. It was only one month ago that I found out the entire world has access to everything I put online. I did not listen to the warnings I was given through authors and directors of my favourite novels and films and now I have given up my life for the world to see. I now understand that because I have not paid attention, 2+2 does now equal 5.

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